MYŌJIN
.::XHF Superstar::.
FKA Draven | Former X*Crown Champion | Former XHF JHW Champion
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Post by MYŌJIN on Jul 18, 2020 15:25:33 GMT -5
I think this might be one of my more favorite ones in recent memory that I've written, though I always feel like I'm missing something. I took the criticism I was given the last time and tried to write this with that in mind. Thoughts? xhf09.proboards.com/thread/15679/noc-rp-1
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Post by Seth Dillinger on Jul 18, 2020 15:57:31 GMT -5
it's shit ur gonna lose
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MYŌJIN
.::XHF Superstar::.
FKA Draven | Former X*Crown Champion | Former XHF JHW Champion
Posts: 836
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Post by MYŌJIN on Jul 18, 2020 16:32:32 GMT -5
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Post by Dave D-Flipz on Jul 18, 2020 16:35:45 GMT -5
I already gave mine in discord
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MYŌJIN
.::XHF Superstar::.
FKA Draven | Former X*Crown Champion | Former XHF JHW Champion
Posts: 836
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Post by MYŌJIN on Jul 18, 2020 18:15:01 GMT -5
True, you did!
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Post by Kyle on Jul 18, 2020 18:22:07 GMT -5
Homerun, dude. I liked the imagery, length, and choice of words. 👍👍
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Post by IMMORTALS on Jul 20, 2020 13:12:00 GMT -5
Yeah this is a Prestige Champion level RP. Very good imagery, nice flow of words and action, very descriptive and sets the tone. And the level of detail is superb.
You're the new monster man of AWF, and AWF needs a new monster man Champion.
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