T-Bone
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Post by T-Bone on Jun 30, 2017 21:44:59 GMT -5
So I thought we'd do a fun exercise. If you haven't read Prestige 1 I SUGGEST YOU GO DO THAT FIRST
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Okay now that Kuroi is gone, here's a template for feedback and fun comments!
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Character of the Night -
Match of the Night -
Moment of the Night -
Line of the Night -
Favorite Thing -
Positive Feedback -
Things to Do Better Next Time -
Things Looking Forward To -
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Post by ForeverKuroi on Jun 30, 2017 21:46:06 GMT -5
Character of the Night - Terry Bradshaw
Match of the Night - Terry Bradshaw
Moment of the Night - Terry Bradshaw
Line of the Night - Terry Bradshaw
Favorite Thing - Terry Bradshaw
Positive Feedback - Terry Bradshaw
Things to Do Better Next Time - Terry Bradshaw
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T-Bone
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Post by T-Bone on Jun 30, 2017 21:46:39 GMT -5
I TOLD YOU TO GO READ THE SHOW FIRST KUROI, SHEESH
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Steele
Graphics Wizards
2017 EoD Winner | 2x AWF Champion | 2x TGK Champion | 1 x XHF Phoenix Champion | AWF Hall of Famer
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Post by Steele on Jul 1, 2017 15:05:31 GMT -5
Character of the Night:
Terry Bradshaw. I don't think there's any doubting that. The man is fucking mental.
Match of the Night: Scorpion vs Lil' Freeze. I had Scorpion down to win this one so the result came as a surprise, particularly with the Frozen Crab spot, that looked like it was gonna build up to a comeback (and eventual win) for Scorpion.
Moment of the Night: Close tie between Terry Bradshaw actually stabbing a man to win a match, and T-Bone revealing himself to be a major investor in AWF
Line of the Night: "Terry Bradshaw turns around and swings something into Copycat's face. It's a dildo!"
Favorite Thing: The Terry Bradshaw vs Copycat match. It was... different. Really funny, would have been my match of the night though I think that award should go to a more "serious" match.
Positive Feedback: The show was nice and concise, I like that. Can't be dealing with a massive wall of text. Love the graphics. Good mix of seriousness and funny shit.
Things to Do Better Next Time: I'd say a little bit of format tinkering perhaps- Maybe spoiler tag the winners so that your eye isn't drawn to the massive "AND THE WINNER IS..." text before you finish reading the opening. And perhaps a stronger differentiation between action and dialogue (italics for action, all colour for speech, etc, stuff like that.) Also, and I know it's only the first show, but maybe a bit more backstage goings-on in between matches to break stuff up.
Things Looking Forward To: The debut of my characters and the general future of the AWF Title tournament, as well as the fallout from MGK & Storm
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Post by strangerdanger on Jul 1, 2017 15:36:59 GMT -5
First off, thanks your your input dude! I'm glad you like Terry Bradshaw, back in the old XHF days he was totally a niche character that was purely comedy, and he still is but I'm glad he's got some fans out there.
As far as formatting goes, I didn't realize we could use spoiler tags on the forum (I haven't been too observational on that front, just been doing what I was used to 10 years ago lol) but as long as that's a possibility I think we can absolutely take that into consideration. Whatever makes the show easier to read is absolutely something we want to consider.
I'm also pumped to see Jackson Steele and Nathaniel debut, you've got a great knack for creating interesting characters and I'm looking forward to seeing how that plays out.
Also, Kuroi and I are trying to make sure that the MGK/Storm fallout does not disappoint, we're going for some compelling stuff on that front, from an RP/story perspective.
But I like your ideas man and if you have anymore be sure to let us know in here (for now) because our main goal is to have end results that please as many members as we can.
We're also looking forward to where T-Bone's angle should lead, although we'd like to point out that he's more of his own entity, rather than an actual "owner" per-say to avoid confusion, but he is super focused on making a good story and I also am looking forward to future interactions between him and Felix. By the time our first PPV show takes place (which is after Prestige 3) I'm sure our card will be stacked with a lot of great matches, probably most importantly, the crowning of the first AWF Champion.
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Kira Izumi
J-ROK Staff
XHF's Resident Weeb
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Post by Kira Izumi on Jul 1, 2017 17:50:12 GMT -5
Sorry to not stay with the format i guess, But i kinda like the intro to the show and stuff. It was nice and always more segments is nice. I might try to pop one up for Kira or Yuki. I know i have something i might be able to use for kira on 9/11 for sure but that's a while away and maybe something for an rp now that i think of it. I think more color variations and more color in general will be nice and my eyes will thank you very much,lol. I think it was good for a first show though.
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Post by Slainmaker on Jul 1, 2017 20:07:38 GMT -5
Also didn't know there was a spoiler tag option as I would have been using it. Another board feature I'll mention is the calendar link at the top, but only because the show being posted caught me by surprise.
I'm guessing from the tone and earlier plea for a writer that the Copycat / Bradshaw match ended up being an inside job. Because of that (and me being a harsh mistress) I'm going to void it from excessive praise but I will say that having contemplated writing the match myself you got the absolute best out of that stipulation.
Are the match writing credits hush hush because I'd be interested in seeing them.
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Kira Izumi
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Post by Kira Izumi on Jul 1, 2017 22:03:08 GMT -5
Alright man! sounds good and no need to worry about racist stuff. That's not how any of my guys and gals roll. And yeah he's very much a serious kind of guy, well except when he was early in his career it was just b-rated horror movies back then.
EDIT: Also i don't wanna get kicked or anything like that because of a stupid mistake. That happened to me before with a stable a while back. lol
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Post by Mongo the Destroyer on Jul 1, 2017 22:08:59 GMT -5
No worries about getting kicked Kira; Kuroi and MGK (and Doc) are all from XHF and we played pretty loose there so I imagine they're quite chill about most things. I mean, when you have a fed that features an ice man, a pig, a literal monster, and Assinator; you gotta be chill, right? lol
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Kira Izumi
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Post by Kira Izumi on Jul 1, 2017 22:24:40 GMT -5
well that's true. It's just weird being in such a chill place for once.lol
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Post by Slainmaker on Jul 2, 2017 8:51:56 GMT -5
I've always found kuroi and strangerdanger to be 100% approachable and accommodating. I've messaged them directly for a few things and I think that's the norm for them so feel free to do the same. As mentioned they are super-chill so just assume you're good unless told otherwise. And you will be told otherwise not insta-banned. Between you and me I think they like having members in their e-fed.
As for feedback, it's starting to dawn on me that VFW may not be the name of a wrestling company, but in my head canon ASW are so low key they can only afford a venue owned by and named after a more successful direct competitor.
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Post by ForeverKuroi on Jul 2, 2017 11:21:32 GMT -5
*instabans Ish for ruining my street cred and making me look like a nice guy* So a VFW is a place built for veterans to get together and have events. It's also rented out, often by indie wrestling. It looks typically like this:
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Post by ForeverKuroi on Jul 2, 2017 11:21:53 GMT -5
Oh nice. The spoiler tag works.
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Kira Izumi
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Post by Kira Izumi on Jul 2, 2017 11:27:13 GMT -5
We could use highschool and middle school gyms too.
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Post by ForeverKuroi on Jul 2, 2017 11:28:11 GMT -5
I'm pretty sure Terry has to stay 500 ft away from those places.
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