COLDWAR RESULTS FEEDBACK

[𝓓𝓾𝓴𝓮 𝓚𝓸𝓼𝓵𝓸𝓯𝓯]

Okay everyone please give me your honest feedback on the show.

[Dylan]

Fantastic show, can't wait to see more from FWA

[𝓓𝓾𝓴𝓮 𝓚𝓸𝓼𝓵𝓸𝓯𝓯]

Thanks Dylan keep them great roleplays coming

[Hyperion]

Great show Duke. My.only criticism would be editing. As nice as colours are, reading in one block of red, green etc. Gets to be tiring. Maybe just have the names of announcers colored or something, kinda like how Kuroi does it in AWF.

Same suggestion for spacing, maybe adding a little extra space or divider between matches and segments. Otherwise, it was awesome. Especially Dukes private area 200 feet above the 35 thousand fans haha. I did some research on the prison for my RP, so imagining both those things was hilarious.

But yeah, three thumbs up! (Don't ask what the middle one is)

[𝓓𝓾𝓴𝓮 𝓚𝓸𝓼𝓵𝓸𝓯𝓯]

Thanks appreciate it and I will definitely work on those things for next show. I will also have everything updated and posted by Friday night

[Mongo the Destroyer]

It was a really solid first show, Duke! The matches were good, the segments flowed well, and you did a good job building the whole atmosphere.

I am echoing Hype's suggestion about spacing/putting in dividers. Since the show just sort of moved from one thing to the next it got a little confusing as to what was actually happening at times; and since the booking got sort of wild toward the end it could lead to misunderstandings.

I purposefully make the editing in the archives simple so that you have a good starting point to build off of (I like colors and other flourishes, so that was all good). Here's an example of how to split the show up though so you can get inspiration for that in terms of formatting.

Overall though, excellent start. I'm excited to see what's next as bot you and V build towards Xtraction!

[Bobby Barratt]

Can't really say anything the other guys haven't said. The matches and the segments were great. The only issues I'd point out were in editing. I found the dark blue a little hard to read, but that may be because I'm reading from mobile.

Good effort man!

[Deleted]

its was a good show, but I'm confused did I do something wrong cause I dont know how I was eliminated without fighting? sorry if it seems a stupid question still learning about this game

[Bobby Barratt]

Nov 2, 2017 2:07:27 GMT -5 @kanajones said:

its was a good show, but I'm confused did I do something wrong cause I dont know how I was eliminated without fighting? sorry if it seems a stupid question still learning about this game

With this game, it's often done for a storyline purpose. Duke might have a plan for your character. 

Might be worth dropping him a pm