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Post by 𝓓𝓾𝓴𝓮 𝓚𝓸𝓼𝓵𝓸𝓯𝓯 on Nov 17, 2017 11:38:35 GMT -5
Okay XHF Network let me know your thoughts about FWA's newest episode of COLDWARS. Let me know what you thought about the segments and let me know if you have any ideas.
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Post by IMMORTALS on Nov 17, 2017 12:09:34 GMT -5
Good work Duke, huge improvement on the flow and styling! If I would have to criticize anything, it would be the text- its all bold, and the text used is a little tough to read sometimes (letters blend together), but otherwise awesome work as usual!
And next time add a space or something between matches haha, I had to leave my desk and come back and couldn't figure out where I left off from lol
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Post by ForeverKuroi on Nov 17, 2017 12:11:37 GMT -5
I really enjoyed the show and I find it to be a huge improvement over the first one.
A suggestion for me would be graphics or some other kind of formatting to separate matches and segments.
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Post by 𝓓𝓾𝓴𝓮 𝓚𝓸𝓼𝓵𝓸𝓯𝓯 on Nov 17, 2017 12:17:49 GMT -5
Thanks, guys I will definitely work on that part of the process
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Post by Bobby Barratt on Nov 17, 2017 12:53:08 GMT -5
I'll get you some graphics knocked up before the next Coldwars. Gives me plenty of time to get it done. Even something to say "match" and "segment" just to break it up
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Post by 𝓓𝓾𝓴𝓮 𝓚𝓸𝓼𝓵𝓸𝓯𝓯 on Nov 17, 2017 13:01:55 GMT -5
Awesome thanks Bobby
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Post by 𝓓𝓾𝓴𝓮 𝓚𝓸𝓼𝓵𝓸𝓯𝓯 on Nov 17, 2017 15:49:54 GMT -5
I want to thank Hyperion, Mad Dog, Ezreil, and Kuroi for all the help writing the matches and also For Jack Diamond writing the segment with him and Levi I appreciate everything guys.
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Post by Dylan on Nov 17, 2017 23:04:03 GMT -5
It was a great show. definitely some graphics being inserted would be great, a break on the eyes. Lots of improvements from episode 1. Can't wait to see what's in store next.
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Post by Mad Dog Smith on Nov 19, 2017 22:01:11 GMT -5
I want to thank Hyperion, Mad Dog, Ezreil, and Kuroi for all the help writing the matches and also For Jack Diamond writing the segment with him and Levi I appreciate everything guys. It was fun for me to write Wallace again. haha . I like the Punk/Hayley/Wallace trio. Imma take a guess and say Hayleys pic base is the girl from paramour? Haha.
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