Kira Izumi
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Post by Kira Izumi on Nov 25, 2017 19:32:22 GMT -5
FEEDBACK! stupid subject bar won't let me fit the whole title in there...
Anyway! this is the feedback thread for SSG Ep.2 "Small City; Big Heart!"
Character of the Night -
Match of the Night -
Moment of the Night -
Line of the Night -
Favorite Thing -
Positive Feedback -
Things to Do Better Next Time -
Things Looking Forward To -
Please leave some feedback if you'd like for this show. And if you read it or just your match... Thanks! Lets kick more ass next wee- i mean month! (sorry i'm used to bi weekly or weekly feds, even if i do run a monthly one)
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Post by Kira Izumi on Nov 25, 2017 19:46:06 GMT -5
Character of the Night - I'd have to say for me Character of the night was Ember Ferrari tonight. She was definitely the most involved, even if Kuroi (The handler not the lady wrestler here) didn't really know about any of it. Match of the Night - Gabby Kaylor Vs. Alexis Grace was pretty good and showed off the strengths and weaknesses of both ladies, i think. Moment of the Night - Venom making a surprise... er, debut(?) the whole segment was funny, well to me anyway. Line of the Night - Not to toot my own horn but the commentary in the Rukia vs Cherry match Favorite Thing - all the debuts tonight! Man am i happy about that or what!? also scared! Positive Feedback - We got this bitch in 45 minutes ahead of schedule! which makes me happy we could get her done! Things to Do Better Next Time - Can still improve on writing and matches. Need new colors for Karin, which i think i may have fixed Things Looking Forward To - THE WINTER FESTIVAL!
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Post by IMMORTALS on Nov 25, 2017 23:45:02 GMT -5
Character of the Night - not your usual answer, but all the staff characters. I'm really liking how all from the announcers to owners are starting to become familiar and recognizable.
Match of the Night - I really like the 2 on 1, whoever wrote that did a great job!
Moment of the Night - Ember Ferarri trying to get lucky with the GUNS lol
Line of the Night - 'ive got gold you've got gold, let get out of here and put our gold together'. Ew.
Favorite Thing - the introduction of Rei, the rich bitch terrorist.
Positive Feedback - BIG progression on Ep. 1 in terms of writing, layout, everything.
Things to Do Better Next Time - maybe space out the matches a bit more so it's not big blocks of action/ text, but really I enjoyed everything. Great work to Kira and SSS staff!
Things Looking Forward To - new storylines, rivalries and feuds kicking off, Bodhi's revenge and new sweet graphics from Cherry!
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Kira Izumi
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Post by Kira Izumi on Nov 26, 2017 11:47:48 GMT -5
Thanks, i wrote the 2 on 1 this time. Hopefully we can get our storlines that are developing to get moving on and do you mean try to put/mix in segments and stuff in between matches more?
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Post by IMMORTALS on Nov 26, 2017 15:16:23 GMT -5
Yeah I liked the introduction of Rei as a segment so stuff like that before/ after matches to add depth will be cool.
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Post by Kira Izumi on Nov 26, 2017 15:28:22 GMT -5
ok... i'll try to add more stuff... well i'll write matches before like two weeks as well and write segments and stuff too. Also i have a thing i'm gonna try and set up for everyone on the card as well.
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Post by ForeverKuroi on Nov 28, 2017 19:57:37 GMT -5
Hey. I just wanted to say the second show was fantastic and was head and shoulders over the first show. I love the storyline, especially with Ember's stuff. I love the graphics. I think SSS is only beginning to recognize its potential.
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Kira Izumi
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Post by Kira Izumi on Nov 28, 2017 20:10:03 GMT -5
Thank you! I hope as time goes by we get more stories and more involved with characters and stuff. Hopefully we only get better after each show.
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